The name of my planet is core manshion. they are fighting a monster and the monster is fighting the core manshoin. and the core manshoin won.
The name of my planet is core manshion. they are fighting a monster and the monster is fighting the core manshoin. and the core manshoin won.
nice story i love it
nice job good work i like that you put a capitle letter and a full stop i think you should ad a naritive
Hi! Lexie here. Like how Core Mansion is fighting a monster.
You need to fix the placement of your full stops and add capital letters after them.
Thanks Lexie.
Thanks for reminding me, that was a long time ago I can wright much better now do you think.